Build a Story Sentence by Sentence: Detective Bimbo

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27.05.2022
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Melpomene
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Antitheocra
27.05.2022 18:27:31
Melpomene

There don't seem to be any active sentence stories atm, so here's a new one with a theme.
Let's collab in a good, exciting detective mystery! Let's see what kind of crimes take place in Bimboland ^^


General rules:
1. Copy the story thus far into your comment
2. Read what has happened thus far. The goal is to create something cohesive
3. Make your own addition: A single sentence as long or short as you like with as many clauses as you desire.
4. You may lightly edit the previous text a little (correct minor spelling errors, divide the text into a new paragraph or address inconsistencies in tense) but no changing the content
5. No pressure
6. Have fun!
 


Start:  She had once witnessed a redhead inhale 28 cinnamon sausages in an eating competition here, but this was this was not the scene that Detective Bubblebottom had pictured when she'd been informed of a murder at the Wanton Waffle House, the cleanest and most reputable topless breakfast diner in town.








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Atheista
28.05.2022 00:56:32
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She had once witnessed a redhead inhale 28 cinnamon sausages in an eating competition here, but this was this was not the scene that Detective Bubblebottom had pictured when she'd been informed of a murder at the Wanton Waffle House, the cleanest and most reputable topless breakfast diner in town. The same readheaded woman lies motionless on the floor, a single stiletto shoe plunged into her heart.

28.05.2022 00:56:32

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Freethinkerland
28.05.2022 05:36:40
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She had once witnessed a redhead inhale 28 cinnamon sausages in an eating competition here, but this was not the scene that Detective Bubblebottom had pictured when she'd been informed of a murder at the Wanton Waffle House, the cleanest and most reputable topless breakfast diner in town. The same readheaded woman lies motionless on the floor, a single stiletto shoe plunged into her heart.
"guess it'd be tactless to order my iced triple espresso with almond milk and a caramel drizzle now." muttered Detective Bubblebottom under her breath as she surveyed the scene, approaching a nearby waitress for questioning.

28.05.2022 05:36:40
just another dead girl walking 
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Antitheocra
29.05.2022 00:17:05
Melpomene

She had once witnessed a redhead inhale 28 cinnamon sausages in an eating competition here, but this was not the scene that Detective Bubblebottom had pictured when she'd been informed of a murder at the Wanton Waffle House, the cleanest and most reputable topless breakfast diner in town. The same red-headed woman lay motionless on the floor, a single stiletto shoe plunged into her heart.
"Guess it'd be tactless to order my iced triple espresso with almond milk and a caramel drizzle now," muttered Detective Bubblebottom under her breath as she surveyed the scene, approaching a nearby waitress for questioning. "What can you tell me about this nightmare shift and the faith of your poor co-worker, Ms. Barbara?"

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08.06.2022 19:39:35
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She had once witnessed a redhead inhale 28 cinnamon sausages in an eating competition here, but this was not the scene that Detective Bubblebottom had pictured when she'd been informed of a murder at the Wanton Waffle House, the cleanest and most reputable topless breakfast diner in town. The same red-headed woman lay motionless on the floor, a single stiletto shoe plunged into her heart.
"Guess it'd be tactless to order my iced triple espresso with almond milk and a caramel drizzle now," muttered Detective Bubblebottom under her breath as she surveyed the scene, approaching a nearby waitress for questioning. "What can you tell me about this nightmare shift and the faith of your poor co-worker, Ms. Barbara?" Barbra was in tears, “ I don’t know, I went to the back to get an order. Then I heard yelling and screaming; I ran to see what was going on. Once I got there, I found her dead on the floor!”

08.06.2022 19:39:35

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Atheista
28.08.2022 05:13:43
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She had once witnessed a redhead inhale 28 cinnamon sausages in an eating competition here, but this was not the scene that Detective Bubblebottom had pictured when she'd been informed of a murder at the Wanton Waffle House, the cleanest and most reputable topless breakfast diner in town. The same red-headed woman lay motionless on the floor, a single stiletto shoe plunged into her heart.
"Guess it'd be tactless to order my iced triple espresso with almond milk and a caramel drizzle now," muttered Detective Bubblebottom under her breath as she surveyed the scene, approaching a nearby waitress for questioning. "What can you tell me about this nightmare shift and the faith of your poor co-worker, Ms. Barbara?" Barbra was in tears, “ I don’t know, I went to the back to get an order. Then I heard yelling and screaming; I ran to see what was going on. Once I got there, I found her dead on the floor!”
Detective Bubblebottom stared at Barbra, noticing her shaky hands, and how her torso moved with each shallow breath.

28.08.2022 05:13:43
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17.11.2022 04:22:21
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She had once witnessed a redhead inhale 28 cinnamon sausages in an eating competition here, but this was not the scene that Detective Bubblebottom had pictured when she'd been informed of a murder at the Wanton Waffle House, the cleanest and most reputable topless breakfast diner in town. The same red-headed woman lay motionless on the floor, a single stiletto shoe plunged into her heart.
"Guess it'd be tactless to order my iced triple espresso with almond milk and a caramel drizzle now," muttered Detective Bubblebottom under her breath as she surveyed the scene, approaching a nearby waitress for questioning. "What can you tell me about this nightmare shift and the faith of your poor co-worker, Ms. Barbara?" Barbra was in tears, “ I don’t know, I went to the back to get an order. Then I heard yelling and screaming; I ran to see what was going on. Once I got there, I found her dead on the floor!”
Detective Bubblebottom stared at Barbra, noticing her shaky hands, and how her torso moved with each shallow breath. She though to herself, how could it have been possible for an altercation that end in death to have come so swiftly? So quietly? There must be more than Ms. Barbara is letting on.

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14.03.2025 04:29:17
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She had once witnessed a redhead inhale 28 cinnamon sausages in an eating competition here, but this was not the scene that Detective Bubblebottom had pictured when she'd been informed of a murder at the Wanton Waffle House, the cleanest and most reputable topless breakfast diner in town. The same red-headed woman lay motionless on the floor, a single stiletto shoe plunged into her heart.

"Guess it'd be tactless to order my iced triple espresso with almond milk and a caramel drizzle now," muttered Detective Bubblebottom under her breath as she surveyed the scene, approaching a nearby waitress for questioning.

"What can you tell me about this nightmare shift and the faith of your poor co-worker, Ms. Barbara?" Barbra was in tears, “ I don’t know, I went to the back to get an order. Then I heard yelling and screaming; I ran to see what was going on. Once I got there, I found her dead on the floor!”

Detective Bubblebottom stared at Barbra, noticing her shaky hands, and how her torso moved with each shallow breath. She thought to herself, how could it have been possible for an altercation that ended in death to have come so swiftly? So quietly? There must be more than Ms. Barbara is letting on. I had to get more information on Barbara’s whereabouts during the time of death. 

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14.03.2025 06:15:28
Melpomene

She had once witnessed a redhead inhale 28 cinnamon sausages in an eating competition here, but this was not the scene that Detective Bubblebottom had pictured when she'd been informed of a murder at the Wanton Waffle House, the cleanest and most reputable topless breakfast diner in town. The same red-headed woman lay motionless on the floor, a single stiletto shoe plunged into her heart.

"Guess it'd be tactless to order my iced triple espresso with almond milk and a caramel drizzle now," muttered Detective Bubblebottom under her breath as she surveyed the scene, approaching a nearby waitress for questioning.

"What can you tell me about this nightmare shift and the faith of your poor co-worker, Ms. Barbara?" Barbra was in tears, “ I don’t know, I went to the back to get an order. Then I heard yelling and screaming; I ran to see what was going on. Once I got there, I found her dead on the floor!”

Detective Bubblebottom stared at Barbra, noticing her shaky hands, and how her torso moved with each shallow breath. She thought to herself: how could it have been possible for an altercation that ended in death to have come so swiftly? So quietly? There must be more than Ms. Barbra is letting on. Detective Bubblebottom had to get more information on Barbra’s whereabouts during the time of death.

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Despite Barbra's assurances, her landlord confirmed the waitress hadn't been home at 11 pm. last night - nor was she usually home, preferring to spend her time at a certain much less reputable establishment.

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Atheista
06.04.2025 02:33:30
tibby

She had once witnessed a redhead inhale 28 cinnamon sausages in an eating competition here, but this was not the scene that Detective Bubblebottom had pictured when she'd been informed of a murder at the Wanton Waffle House, the cleanest and most reputable topless breakfast diner in town. The same red-headed woman lay motionless on the floor, a single stiletto shoe plunged into her heart.

"Guess it'd be tactless to order my iced triple espresso with almond milk and a caramel drizzle now," muttered Detective Bubblebottom under her breath as she surveyed the scene, approaching a nearby waitress for questioning.

"What can you tell me about this nightmare shift and the faith of your poor co-worker, Ms. Barbara?" Barbra was in tears, “ I don’t know, I went to the back to get an order. Then I heard yelling and screaming; I ran to see what was going on. Once I got there, I found her dead on the floor!”

Detective Bubblebottom stared at Barbra, noticing her shaky hands, and how her torso moved with each shallow breath. She thought to herself: how could it have been possible for an altercation that ended in death to have come so swiftly? So quietly? There must be more than Ms. Barbra is letting on. Detective Bubblebottom had to get more information on Barbra’s whereabouts during the time of death.

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Despite Barbra's assurances, her landlord confirmed the waitress hadn't been home at 11 pm. last night - nor was she usually home, preferring to spend her time at a certain much less reputable establishment. "Oh, apartment H? I'm sure she's probably passed out on the floor of Memories Nightclub, check there. While you're at it, remind her she's late on rent, would ya?," Bubblebottom wasn't sure how a dead lady would pay rent, but made their way to the club.

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